INT-RACHEL'S HOUSE(Family Room)-EVENING
We "meet"RACHEL'S FATHER,a fit man in his early 40's still wearing his work clothes, a dress shirt from behind as he is unwinding, watching television.
On the TV is an ad for ProxyCyber Brain Computer Interface
The FIRST SHOT of the televised ad is of the headset that allows the interface ,the same headset we saw both RACHEL and JACOB wearing earlier.
Opens with a BUSINESS WOMAN in a smart Business Suit alone in this non descript but upscale hotel room,the curtains, the blinds are open we see lights and signs in another language than English.The BUSINESS WOMAN appears to be exhausted, almost to tired to remove her heels with her hands,instead she "crashes" on the bed and removes both shoes with her feet.
We can tell by the lighting of the room that it is later in the evening.
The blinds are still open.
CLOSE UP on a half eaten Room Service style platter.The BUSINESS WOMANis lying on the bed,flipping through channel on the TV set with a remote control.She turns off the TV and places her head on the pillow looking at the view outside the window.She appears lonely,sad for a moment and than reaches for her laptop on the night table.
CUT to a shot of the BUSINESS WOMAN,now wearing a headset,smiling her head on the pillow ,wide awake.
A handsome HOUSEHUSBAND also wearing a headset sits in a recliner.
The HOUSEHUSBAND'S eyes are shut but he is not slumbering but Imparting
a succession of
He,the HOUSEHUSBAND holding a toddler
...another OLDER CHILD of 5 or 6 sitting in the breakfast nook awkwardly reaching for a pitcher of milk that tumbles and spills milk all over the kitchen table.
next a TIGHT SHOT on a frying pan of scrambled eggs burning,the TODDLER in HOUSEHUSBAND'S arms point at the frying pan laughing
The BUSINESS WOMAN now sitting up,one hand on her temple laughing ,presumably at the Focused Imagery via the Proxy Cyber headset and program.Still laughing ,the BUSINESS WOMAN closes the blinds and curtains
The words- "ProxyCyber Brings you -THERE" come up on the TV screen,the commercial has ended